/.. • ADDicted // ..• . .

•  // •

//

your heart races

races

racessssssss

trying to catch up to

youR BODY TREMBLES you can’t hold //

still your mind’s out of

{YOU CAN’T} control where it goes you can’t //

·

breathe you want to deny

·

what you need BUT IT’S

//NO USE  you might as well

face it you’re

add

add

addictedddddddd

you can’t live

WITHOUT IT  // you

go mad all

·

alone facing

·

//this   and there
isn’t
any
any

any thing you can do

anything // but

GIVE IN

give up

a KISS…  is{n’t} all you

need // to have

MORE

now

 //for
ever

MORE //

you’re add

add
add

icted // YOU GOTTA

FACE

//IT  has you by the

{ heart }  throat  [ BALLS ]  and you might

as well // face

·

it  ’cause there’s

·

not a thing

• •  A  thing

•  •  • NOTHING•

you can do

but fuck

//ing  WHAT YOU WANT

can you do what you


want to do  /  WANT TO do  /  WANT to do

you know what you WANT to do //

give
give
give

IN  • • •

give it up…  ..

…another kiss

won’t  / be

enough

Never ENOUGH

//Never

too much

ADD
ADD
ADDicted
to this

lust // for the pain

/

of  the guilty

pleasure//

it’s ALL you


think about

think about

think about

it    // you might as

well FACE

IT… • …..

. . ..  ·•. .  .. ·/ /

you’re addicted to
LoveUST //

/

•·  ..

if  you haven’t heard this version of  “Addicted to Love” you’re in for a real treat

“Addicted to Love”   Florence and The Machine

image: Gaudenzio Marconi (1841-1885), Nudo femminile, circa 1870
{  public domain }

rewritten version above originally posted  25 September 2011

the first “addicted” was posted  15 January 2011  ~

»¤«

addicted to you

far stronger than any drug

you course through my veins

»¤«

.

.

the longer version was inspired by
the prompt “use repetition in a poem”
from the amazing HEDGEWITCH
Poetics ~ Say It Again, Sam
at  dVerse ~ Poets Pub

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3 Comments

Filed under blog anniversary, Creative Every Day, love, lust, NaBloPoMo, poetry, Post-A-Day, redux

3 responses to “/.. • ADDicted // ..• . .

  1. you might as well face it your addicted to love…
    you might as well face it…

    haha. you have me singing along
    oh how true…

    i’ve fallen down the rabbit hole…

  2. Those guilty pleasures are sure addicting, smiles ~ Good to see you Dani ~

  3. I totally sang along with your poem. the way the words moved across the stage.

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