ºº i’d love to change the world ºº

.

don’t know

don’t know

what.  to.  do.

C

H

A

N

G

E

S

h a p p e n i n’

b a d   things   COMIN’

••

••

W H O L E

WORLD

t

u

r

n

i

n’

 t u o    e d i s n i

n d s ᴉ p ǝ    p o ʍ u

s

l

i

d

i

n’

fast

s

l

i

d

i

n’

fast

into

THE

DARK

abyss

.

don’t know

don’t know

what.  to.  do.

don’t   wanna   L O O K

don’t   wanna   S E E

don’t   wanna   K N O W

W H A T ‘ S   gonna   happen

   to   me

and  you

and  you…

and  YOU…

s

l

i

d

i

n’

fast

s

l

i

d

i

n’

fast

p a s t

the  POINT  of

n o

r e t u r n

what  to  do?

what  to  do?

THAT’S

the

question

ain’t   N O   BODY

 

got   N O   answers

 

i’d  love  to  say

i’ll   leave   it   all

leave   it   all

up

to

Y O U

but who?
but who?

.

don’t know

don’t know

what.  to.  do.


“I’d Love To Change The World”    Jetta

image ~   earth 8   from  Clipart from Clipartheaven.com
“images are free to use on personal web pages in exchange for a hyper link back to site”

this poem was directly inspired by the title and lyrics of  “I’d Love To Change The World”  by   Jetta

this is my submission to ~

Poetics ~ Under the Influence of  Music   at    dVerse ~ Poets Pub
prompt:   write a poem about/prompted by music

thank you,  Anthony!

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12 Comments

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12 responses to “ºº i’d love to change the world ºº

  1. it can be quite overwhelming when you look at the large picture…where to even begin…or can i even make a dent in all that needs done…but every little bit helps…and i love what you did with the words, the inside out and upside down…and playing with fonts…cool dani…and great to see you

  2. Excellent poem, beautifully constructed and with a great choice of inspirational song.
    Really Lovely offering dani ♥ thank you for sharing it.

  3. All I can do is be the difference I wish to see in this world… I honestly think the key to peace and change in this world is RESPECT… not everyone is going to accept you–and that is ok. But we go out of our way to be bigots, homophobics–just plain hatful beings… Needs to stop.

  4. WHOA! My brain cannot comprehend this post, but I was soooooooooooo excited to see you on my blog. How are you? I hope you are doing FABULOUSLY!!!
    I miss my sparkly hugs!

  5. hey – i would rather like to keep my eyes open to see where the journey’s going you know… smiles… good to see you dani…
    i love how you put the song on the page..the sliding made palpable…nice..

  6. i love visual shaped poetry in free verse style.. and your style is both unique and interesting.. and the song is inspiring too.. as true it is all up to you and us.. as a team of effort.. one step.. one voice… one song.. one poem.. at a time!..;)

  7. you worked the visual and the poetic here, nice

  8. What a treat in formatting.. Really music can have that effect.

  9. That’s a great visual treat – you took the prompt to altogether different height…..well done.

  10. Wow – this poem packs a wallop! Just love how you arranged the words. Good to see you, Dani.

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