∙ • § • ㅅ ∙ merde ∙ ㅅ • § • ∙

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§

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merde!  merde!

i  hear you whimpering in the shadows

whatcha gonna do?

bridges all burned

no one trust you…

no one like you…

no one gonna help you neither

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merde!  merde!

i  hear you praying

…but  too late

time’s run out

you gotta face the music

devil wants his due

nowhere to run

pay up!

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•  § 

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∙ ㅅ§ㅅ ∙


“Bad Boys”    Bob Marley


**merde ~  ‘shit’  in  French  { makes it sound classier,  don’t it? }


artwork ~   “The Devil Attacking the Window”   Matthias Grünewald
{ public domain }



this is my submission to ~


Friday Flash 55    see the   G-Man at Mr. KnowItAll
flash fiction 55  { 55 words of  ‘merde’  just  for you,  G! }



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17 Comments

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17 responses to “∙ • § • ㅅ ∙ merde ∙ ㅅ • § • ∙

  1. Merde! The French is so much nicer than the English. I LOVE this and the image is a nice accompaniment.

  2. Yes, eventually a person’s time does run out…. A good 55 here, Dani.

  3. ah sounds just like the devil….isolating you…stripping away your supports making you feel you have no other choice than to take his offer…

    • that’s his modus operandi, isn’t it? it’s not much of a poem or story, but it came out to exactly 55 words on the first try so i just left it alone. thanks for coming by, brian!

  4. The devil never steps on your toes when you dance together.

  5. Ha! nothing classier than swearing en francais love your diabolical 55, Dani.

  6. G-Man

    Dani Dear…..
    YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Your Alive and well I hope.
    I feel kind of special on this one, it was obviously Kismet about the word count.
    Loved your shitty 55
    I have missed you, and I’m tickled that you took the time to count your words. Thank you for always being so creative and classy, You Rock!
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End

  7. Merde sounds classier indeed ~ Watch out for those devilish shades ~

    Have a good weekend ~

  8. othermary

    Powerful 55! And the image is great too.

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