the  pain  is  just  too  much



when  it’s  someone  else’s

and  there’s


you  can  do






Filed under NaBloPoMo, poetry, Post-A-Day2013

10 responses to “sometimes….

  1. simplicity of words less is more n more is so beautifully expressed in this sentiment your poetry brings tear to beez eyes tiz sad and strongly felt your words that all will relate to this I am sure :) lovely Dannie b zx

  2. ugh. so true…you feel so helpless…

  3. Here is a piece of song i was writing you can have it.
    Seems like days of hazy
    and butterflies and daisy
    all think me crazy
    have all deserted me

  4. Very, very true, Dani.

  5. So very true–a touching write–that reminds me of the anguish of a parent trying to save a child from heartbreak

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