ꖢꔷ i can build a house ꔷꖢ

ꔷ ꖢ ꔷ

i can build a house

with the East wall looking to the future

the South made up of  the present

the West nothing but the past

the North facing infinite possibilities

and above a sky full of  stars

but it’s not a home

without you

ꔷ ꖢ ꔷ

ꕐ ꔷꖢꔷ ꖪ

ꔷ ꕐ ꔷꖢꔷ ꖪ ꔷ


“A House Is Not A Home”    Ella Fitzgerald

artwork ~   “Houses at Falaise in the Fog”   Claude Monet
{ public domain }

*in certain divinatory practices the directions represent time phases:

North = Infinite Possibility (no-time)
South = Present – Now
West = Past
East = Future

this is my submission to ~

Words Count With Mama Zen    at   imaginary garden with real toads
prompt:   build a house in 48 words or less


thank you,  Mama Zen!

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12 Comments

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12 responses to “ꖢꔷ i can build a house ꔷꖢ

  1. ellaedge

    Heart breaking-so bittersweet~ :D
    Your directions at the end reminded me of Tarot’s wisdom~
    <3 your poem

  2. Helen

    Sweet, so sweet. Love how you point us in all the right directions.

  3. Great way to point out what’s important. Lovely.

    Flash 55 – You Get What You Ask For

  4. So true Dani. Without love it is a “house”, love makes it a home.

  5. A good one….. Theres a hairline gap between a house and a home….. LOVE breaches the gap! Appreciate :D

  6. who is in the home, makes all the difference no matter what we try to incorp0rate….

    how are you dani?

    • i so agree! vertigo’s been around a lot but i’m hoping to be able to see everyone during Poetry Month. thanks for asking, brian. it’s always nice to see you.

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