• ≈ ꘚ ≈ • carried by the wind { revised }

carried  by  the  wind

thoughts  of   you

floating  through  my  dreams

≈ ꘚ ≈

≈ ꘚ ≈


“Dream On”   Aerosmith

originally posted  11 March 2010
{ revised }

artwork ~  “Bride of  the Wind”   Oskar Kokoschka
{ fair use }

i am participating in ~

NaBloPoMoSoup

“Dream On”   Aerosmith

lyrics ~

Every time that I look in the mirror
All these lines on my face getting clearer
The past is gone
It went by, like dusk to dawn
Isn’t that the way
Everybody’s got their dues in life to pay

Yeah, I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it’s everybody’s sin
You got to lose to know how to win

Half my life
Is in books’ written pages
Lived and learned from fools and
From sages
You know it’s true
All the things come back to you

Sing with me, sing for the year
Sing for the laugh, sing for the tears
Sing with me, if it’s just for today
Maybe tomorrow, the good lord will take you away, yeah

Yeah, sing with me, sing for the year
Sing for the laugh, sing for the tear
Sing with me, if it’s just for today
Maybe tomorrow, the good Lord will take you away

Dream On Dream On Dream On
Dream until the dream come true
Dream On Dream On Dream On
Dream until your dream comes true
Dream On Dream On Dream On
Dream On Dream On
Dream On Dream On

Sing with me, sing for the year
Sing for the laugh, sing for the tear
Sing with me, if it’s just for today
Maybe tomorrow, the good Lord will take you away
Sing with me, sing for the year
Sing for the laugh, sing for the tear
Sing with me, if it’s just for today
Maybe tomorrow, the good Lord will take you away…

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4 Comments

Filed under micropoetry, NaBloPoMo, poetry, Post-A-Day2013, redux

4 responses to “• ≈ ꘚ ≈ • carried by the wind { revised }

  1. cool…was just telling someone the other day that i really enjoy your short verse…kinda like modern haiku….cool dani…happy saturday

    • you were talking about my verse with someone? awwwwwwwww! THAT is so cool! thank you!

      the first writing i ever did was haiku/senryu on twitter. most of the “revisiting 2010” poems were originally senryu and i now break them up into a more natural flow, maybe add or take away a word without concern for syllable count. it means so much to me that you like it, brian! thank you! happy saturday to you as well!

  2. Love the brevity. In three little lines you convey all the necessary meaning. Great work.

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