∙ᵹ∙ ₰ ∙∙ tell me what you want ∙∙ ₰ ∙ᵹ∙

∙ ₰ ∙

tell me what you want
i will deliver it to you

tell me what you need
i will make sure you’re satisfied

tell me what you dream of
i will fulfill your fantasies

but it’s not your love i seek
your gratification is my only desire

i am a giver
i feed on your dependency

∙ᵹ∙ ₰ ∙ᵹ∙

ᵹ ∙₰∙ ᵹ

∙∙ ₰ ∙∙

∙ ₰ ∙

an amazing song and the inspiration for my poem ~

“Pretender”   Sarah Jaffe

artwork ~   “The Dream”   Ferdinand Hodler
{ public domain }

this is my submission to ~

Friday Flash 55    see the   G-Man at Mr. KnowItAll
flash fiction 55

i am also participating in ~




Filed under Friday Flash 55, NaBloPoMo, poetry, Post-A-Day2012

12 responses to “∙ᵹ∙ ₰ ∙∙ tell me what you want ∙∙ ₰ ∙ᵹ∙

  1. which can be a little scary as well…when someone is that in need of gratification..and someone else being dependent on them…at least to me it seems…

    • oh, i definitely meant this as scary, not at all romantic or healthy! {smile} not sure that’s what Sarah Jaffe was conveying in her song, but that’s where it led me. Merry Christmas, Brian! ♥

  2. Dani: Oh my! Great! I remember when I was young meeting guys like this (and I know there are girls the same way) and I always feel sad for them. Have a great weekend.

  3. It was dark and I do enjoy dark.

  4. You sound like THE perfect woman to me Dani…
    What an awesome little ditty.
    Loved your giving 55
    Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting and commenting with others today
    And please have a Kick Ass Holiday Week-End
    Merry Christmas !!!

  5. othermary

    Oh, now that’s a nice, unhealthy compulsion. ;-)

  6. margaretbednar

    Terrifying, that woman. She’ll make all of us look bad :)

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