∙ร∙ ฒ ∙ร∙ coming close { revised }



∙ ฒ ∙

coming close

i breathe you in…..

intoxicating scent of  your skin

leaves me breathless

∙ร∙ ฒ ∙ร∙

ร ฒ ร

∙ ฒ ∙



“Close to You”   Utada Hikaru

originally posted  23 April 2010
{ revised }

artwork ~   “Blue Lovers”   Marc Chagall
{  fair use }

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Filed under lust, micropoetry, NaBloPoMo, poetry, Post-A-Day2012, redux

2 responses to “∙ร∙ ฒ ∙ร∙ coming close { revised }

  1. I like the rhythm you create even in these few lines: the rhyme in the middle two, and the build up to the final closing line, which links back to the first. This is a very well-crafted and lovely poem.

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