·१∙ •ऌ• ∙१· memories of kisses { revisiting 2010 }

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in the morning’s  light

memories of  your kisses

brush across my mind

·१∙ •ऌ• ∙१·

१ •ऌ• १

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“Memory of  One Kiss”   Ricardo Concciante

originally posted  4 March 2010

artwork ~  “Le baiser de paon” (peacock kiss)  Bliu
{ creative commons license }

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29 Comments

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29 responses to “·१∙ •ऌ• ∙१· memories of kisses { revisiting 2010 }

  1. Then you looked at me
    Smiled ~ kissed new life
    Into the memories

  2. Brief and sweet, with an undertone of sadness. Nicely done.

    • thank you, Jack! you picked up on a thought i had when writing this ~ if he/she was still there, why would one need memories of kisses rather than just kissing again?

  3. At first I thought the poem was from 2010, but now I’m thinking it was the memory form 2010. Beautiful…

  4. Unfortunately, sometimes memories are all that remain of good things. Sigh.

  5. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade)

    Lovely!

  6. So sweet and yet a little sad… you’ve said so much in so few words… well done.

  7. So simple. So profound. Ideal.

  8. This is so sweet it reminded me of mornings ancient years ago when I felt that way. Shoot! It was so nice to have forgotten, hee hee.

  9. Nice… artristic picture.. beautiful.

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