/.. • ADDicted // ..• . . {redux}

•  // •

//

your heart races

races

racessssssss

trying to catch up to

youR BODY TREMBLES you can’t hold //

still your mind’s out of

{YOU CAN’T} control where it goes you can’t //

·

breathe you want to deny

·

what you need BUT IT’S

//NO USE  you might as well

face it you’re

add

add

addictedddddddd

you can’t live

WITHOUT IT  // you

go mad all

·

alone facing

·

//this   and there
isn’t
any
any

any thing you can do

anything // but

GIVE IN

give up

a KISS…  is{n’t} all you

need // to have

MORE

now

 //for
ever

MORE //

you’re add

add
add

icted // YOU GOTTA

FACE

//IT  has you by the

{ heart }  throat  [ BALLS ]  and you might

as well // face

·

it  ’cause there’s

·

not a thing

• •  A  thing

•  •  • NOTHING•

you can do

but fuck

//ing  WHAT YOU WANT

can you do what you


want to do  /  WANT TO do  /  WANT to do

you know what you WANT to do //

give
give
give

IN  • • •

give it up…  ..

…another kiss

won’t  / be

enough

Never ENOUGH

//Never

too much

ADD
ADD
ADDicted
to this

lust // for the pain

/

of  the guilty

pleasure//

it’s ALL you


think about

think about

think about

it    // you might as

well FACE

IT… • …..

. . ..  ·•. .  .. ·/ /

you’re addicted to
LoveUST //

/

•·  ..

if  you haven’t heard this version of  “Addicted to Love” you’re in for a real treat

“Addicted to Love”   Florence and The Machine

image: Gaudenzio Marconi (1841-1885), Nudo femminile, circa 1870

rewritten version above originally posted  25 September 2011

the first “addicted” was posted  15 January 2011  ~

»¤«

addicted to you

far stronger than any drug

you course through my veins

»¤«

.

.

the longer version was inspired by
the prompt “use repetition in a poem”
from the amazing HEDGEWITCH
Poetics ~ Say It Again, Sam
at  dVerse ~ Poets Pub

i am participating in ~

NaBloPoMoSoup

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