Ꮺ i sung of Chaos and Eternal Night Ꮺ

i sung of  Chaos and Eternal Night

within the Eye of  the Hurricane

where up was down

back was forward

and the silence echoed your name

•º•

nothing could tear away

my need for you

in dark

in cold

inside

below

•º•

all sanity gone

all vanity done

all emotions just one

pain

dancing

to the song i sung

of  Chaos and Eternal Night

•º•

no end to the night

no end to your spite

no will left to fight

i held the pain close

singing

sweet nothings

to no one

•º•

i sung of  Chaos and Eternal Night

from within the Eye of  the Hurricane

º•Ꮺ•º


“Rock You Like A Hurricane”   Scorpions   /   Neutralia1

this is my submission to these fabulous sites for poets~

Paradise Lost   at   POETRY JAM
prompt:   write about Paradise Lost or use the line “I sung of Chaos and Eternal Night”

thank you for the opportunity to cook the jam again!

Open Link Night Week 20     at   dVerse ~ Poets Pub
submit a new or old poem

The Poetry Pantry #77  at   Poets United
they are accepting submissions HERE  for their second poetry anthology
submit a new or old poem

Open Link Monday   at   imaginary garden with real toads
submit a new or old poem

The Poetry Picnic Week 15   at   The Gooseberry Garden
one can submit a new or old poem

i am also participating in ~

NaBloPoMo

Post A Day

“Rock You Like A Hurricane”   Scorpions

lyrics ~

It’s early morning
The sun comes out
Last night was shaking
And pretty loud
My cat is purring
And scratches my skin
So what is wrong
With another sin
The bitch is hungry
She needs to tell
So give her inches
And feed her well
More days to come
New places to go
I’ve got to leave
It’s time for a show

Here I am, rock you like a hurricane
Here I am, rock you like a hurricane
 My body is burning
It starts to shout
Desire is coming
It breaks out loud
Lust is in cages
Till storm breaks loose
Just have to make it
With someone I choose
The night is calling
I have to go
The wolf is hungry
He runs the show
He’s licking his lips
He’s ready to win
On the hunt tonight
For love at first sting

Here I am, rock you like a hurricane
Here I am, rock you like a hurricane
Here I am, rock you like a hurricane
Here I am, rock you like a hurricane
Rock you like a hurricane

It’s early morning
The sun comes out
Last night was shaking
And really loud
My cat is purring
It scracthed my skin
So what is wrong
With another sin
The night is calling
I have to go
The wolf is hungry
He runs the show
He’s licking his lips
He’s ready to win
On the hunt tonight
For love at first sting

Here I am, rock you like a hurricane
Here I am, rock you like a hurricane
Here I am, rock you like a hurricane
Here I am, rock you like a hurricane
Here I am

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28 Comments

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28 responses to “Ꮺ i sung of Chaos and Eternal Night Ꮺ

  1. dani- I live close to the coast so every hurricane season it’s a gamble as to whether or not we will get hit… the song brings me back quite a few years. = )

    • that has to bring a lot of stress to your life! i was only thinking of an emotional hurricane. and yes… a very old song, isn’t it? ♥ thank you for your visit and comment, Laurie. {smile} they are much appreciated.

  2. love the playful words on top.

    The second part is very powerful and hot.
    best,

    Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

  3. Excellent poem. Love your imagery and word play. Well done.

    Melanie

  4. I loved it, I did a nature type poem, too. The weather packs a powerful punch with your emotions! Well Done~

  5. Well written. I like the repeating lines between the longer verses. Very effective.

  6. Nicely done…really enjoyed this!

  7. i like to think love a hurricane itself…it can be devastating actually in its destruction…but it also can move earth and inside that eye feel calm and safe….

    always good to see you dani

  8. I think you have weaved that wonderful line into your work beautifully! Intensely crafted, a fantastic read!

  9. hedgewitch

    ah those rockstar boys in their skintight leather pants…sigh. I love the Scorps, and that song. As always dani, you please all the senses with your carefully constructed posts. Your poem also resonates–that place in the eye of a wild hurricane, I lived in it for years, repetitively hurricanes being seasonal and all–one might almost call it a Madhouse–but there’s Hope if you follow that dim candle, girl.

  10. singing sweet nothings to no one…love this…so much said in just one line.. also love the image of the eye of the hurricane…all in all a safe place in all the storm going on around..

  11. Life certainly whirls us in hurricanes when it chooses. Well expressed piece. :)

  12. Very interesting read. Thank you for sharing. I like the vivid imagery.
    -Erick Flores

  13. Greetings:

    Hope that you have had a great Merry Christmas.

    Thanks for the delightful support along the way,

    Happy New Year.

    Share a piece of your poetry today at our poetry party today if you could.,

    Have fun!

    Sending you love and blessings.
    Cheers.

    xoxox

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