˜·§·˜ the sixth sense ~ lust ˜·§·˜ {redux} #aros #31

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the feel of skin….

the taste of  salt on a neck….

the sounds of  another’s pleasure….

the natural scent of  a man or woman….

the sight of  desire in the eyes gazing into your own….

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and the sixth sense ~  lust

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first posted 31 January 2011 {final line revised} each of  the first five lines was originally an individual small stone.

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i am participating in ~

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#aros   a river of  stones  {this is the last day for #aros until autumn, i believe. i hope you’ve enjoyed it.}

Visit The River 

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NaBloPoMo

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Post A Day

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10 Comments

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10 responses to “˜·§·˜ the sixth sense ~ lust ˜·§·˜ {redux} #aros #31

  1. Gorgeous and sensual!

    • thank you, MZ! ♥ it isn’t technically a “small stone” but each line was an individual small stone first. i appreciate your sweet comment!

  2. I should try to have that sixth sense removed or something, for all the good it does me. but your piece is lovely, dani.

    • {giggle} i have to give credit to Ainsley Allmark for his comment when i originally posted this. the final line then was “what’s not to lust after?” and he called lust the sixth sense. thank you for your visit and kind comment. ♥ i hope your sixth {and first through fifth} sense gets fully… um, exercised soon.

  3. very nice rework dani…i can see lust at the 6th…the rest hasa finely sensual texture…

  4. The sixth sense is lust? Lust significant enough to be allocated a sense all to itself? hmmm maybe you’re right Dani

  5. Your presentation is lovely and I love the piece. : )

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