·♦· confession ·♦·

·♦·

confession may be

good for the soul….   but my heart

breaks for the sins i commit

· ♦•Ψ•♦·

this is my submission to ~

Prompt #54   at   Haiku Heights
prompt:   confession  {please forgive me for the extra two syllables in the final line}

The Poetry Picnic Week 1   at   The Gooseberry Garden
prompt:   Adam and Eve

i am also participating in ~

NaBloPoMo

Post A Day

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28 responses to “·♦· confession ·♦·

  1. You ARE the haiku queen.

  2. but left alone will it heal? or fester?

  3. Sins? When we commit them.. we are not knowing… yes later confession soothes the soul… of course.. well done..
    My uncomfortable confession is here…

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.com/2011/07/uncomfortable-confession.html

    • “Moon’s uncomfortable
      Struggles to see through thick clouds
      Must be missing me..”

      that is truly stunning, Ramesh! thank you so much for your visit and kind comment.

  4. You are covering the spectrum Dani
    You address confession from the beginning of time with the image
    Lovely dear friend

  5. iblogmoore

    This is the absolute best use of the prompt, my heart sank when I came to the end Wow!

  6. Powerful one, dani! Well done ~~

  7. very powerful one dani..

    Someone is Special

  8. That is so true.. Amazing haiku with a lovely pic too.. :)
    http://sandhyaguptamp.blogspot.com/2011/08/confession.html

  9. magicalmysticalteacher

    There’s an ever-so-fine line between heartbreak and heart-healing…

  10. Leo

    repercussions of a confession.. yes, it breaks my heart too when i confess..

  11. Wonderful haiku……………….

  12. fitting, powerful, and beautiful!

  13. I really identify with this…
    Your poems are always beautiful and insightful. Thank you so much for everything you do!
    ~~LifeInVerse

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