°• ₱ • whisper • ₱ •° {redux}

Cypress Tree Byōbu, Kano Eitoku, 1590
Image via Wikipedia

°

°

°

°

i hear them whisper

calling me to join them there

at the end of life

•° ₱ °•

°

°

°

°

originally posted 12 February 2010

°

°

°

this is my submission to ~

Poetic Forms:   Haiku   at   The Purple Treehouse

°

°

i am participating in ~

°

NaBloPoMo

°

°

°

Advertisements

16 Comments

Filed under haikū, micropoetry, NaBloPoMo, poetry, Post-A-Day2011, The Purple Treehouse

16 responses to “°• ₱ • whisper • ₱ •° {redux}

  1. Great post! I love poetry very much. Free free to check out my first poem also everyone!

    • thank you, Amyree! ♥ i think your haiku is lovely and more in keeping than mine with the traditional haiku. if you mean that is your first poem ever, you’re off to a super start! ♥

  2. nice…your last line is a great twist…yes they do call us forward…

  3. I liked it — reminded me of elderly relatives talking to their deceased family on their own deathbed.

  4. Superb – just superb.

    Anna :o]

  5. stunning Haiku.

    Greetings:

    Welcome sharing your poetry with us today.

    Poems that are old but need more attention, poems related to nature and life are welcome.

    Keep up the excellence.
    Hope to see you linked in and share.

    BEST!
    xoxox

    • i will definitely be there! ♥ had some traveling to do today but i’ll be there asap. thank you so much for the invitation and your very kind comment. ♥

  6. Very nice, You have a real talent…

    Melanie

  7. Excellent post.
    Happy Holidays….
    I know you write stunning Haiku, welcome sharing with us,
    1 to 3 or more are welcome.
    no theme.
    Hope to see you in,
    Smiles!

i'd love to hear from you ♥ thanks! {comments must be approved before they are visible}

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s