ᶮ ᶋ ̊ take my breath away ̊ ᶋ ᶯ {redux}

Lajos Gulacsy

 ᶋ

when you touch my face

ah,  you take my breath away

and leave me trembling

 ̊  ᶮ  ᶋ  ᶯ  ̊ 

originally posted 12 February 2010

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Filed under haikū, love, lust, micropoetry, NaPoWriMo, poetry, Post-A-Day2011, redux, senryū

4 responses to “ᶮ ᶋ ̊ take my breath away ̊ ᶋ ᶯ {redux}

  1. ah – that happens easily…beautiful painting to go with your words dani

    • thank you, Claudia. ♥ the simplest of touches ~ even a glance can have a profound effect when filled with love. isn’t the painting beautiful?

  2. jgavinallan

    I’m still trembling…so lovely..so beautiful
    Jaye

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