·ɤ ◦Ɣ◦ ɤ· come with me {redux}

"the garden of paradise" Edmund Dulac

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come with me, my love

exiled though we be….       we’ll build

our own paradise

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originally posted 14 December 2010

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this is my submission to ~

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The Poetry Picnic Week Week 1   at   The Gooseberry Garden
prompt:   Adam and Eve

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6 Comments

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6 responses to “·ɤ ◦Ɣ◦ ɤ· come with me {redux}

  1. at what cost this love…forsaking it all lets go

    • if i remember correctly, this was originally written for a twitter prompt of ‘paradise’ ~ my sacrilegious response was – exile me and i’ll build my own paradise. {i know, i’m bad.}

  2. Very good take on the subject. Nice one.

    My offering for this first Gooseberry Garden picnic: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/this-eden/

    • i wish i could have written a new poem to submit but i still couldn’t have come close to how romantic and meaningful your poem is, charles! your wife is a lucky lady. thank you for your visit and kind comment.

  3. go ahead, what a lovely and inviting entry.

    love it.
    :)
    Happy Poetry Picnic!

    • thank you, Morning! {smile} i adore your submission both as a stand-alone poem and how you combined all of the prompts. a wonderful write! ♥

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