▫◊◦Ω◦◊▫ mirror… mirror… . #5lines

Mirror, mirror.
Image by andy castro via Flickr

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mirror…

mirror…

don’t you call

i won’t look at you

no! not at all

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i know you

mirror…

you traitorous bitch

all you’ll show me

is some old witch

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this is my submission to ~

The Thursday Think Tank #48  .  at  .  Poets United
prompt:  mirrors
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i am participating in ~

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May 2011  .  at  .  NaBloPoMo
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Post A Day

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May 2011: International 5 Line Poetry Month
sponsored by  .  Tina Nguyen .  at  .  A wish for the sky…
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Pentastich

this  is {i hope} a double pentastich ~ each verse of  five lines can stand alone as a poem. the five line form of  poetry known as pentastich is sometimes used as an alternative name for quintain but they are not exactly the same. where quintain have a word or syllable count {among other things} pentastich are often free or blank verse.  to learn more about pentastich click  .  Here  .  or  .  Here    and to learn about quintain click Here .  or  .  Here.

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12 Comments

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12 responses to “▫◊◦Ω◦◊▫ mirror… mirror… . #5lines

  1. YOU made me laugh; fun take on the prompt~

  2. jgavinallan

    This is a straight forward, just plain meaty poem.

    Terrific

    Jaye

    • thank you, Jaye! that’s very kind of you. i’ve been having more laptop problems this week, but i’ll be around to your site asap. ♥

  3. Wow, this is intense. If I were a mirror and you were looking into it, all I would see the the most beautiful soul I know. xoxoxoxox

    • aawwww! that’s who i would see ~ you! the most beautiful, sweetest, warmest, kindest, most talented woman i know and love. ♥ *big squishy hugs* ♥

  4. You’ve stolen my mirror!

    Brilliant!

    Anna :o]

  5. Very amusing poem Dani! Like it!

    Mirror for moi? Nah. I’ll see my beasty alter ego; it’s very much at home on Twitter!

    Thanks :)

    • i’d rather look into my lover’s eyes and see myself the way he does. it’s always much more flattering. {smile} thank you for your visit and kind comment, Pierre. ♥

  6. haha…i dont look at mirrors…i dont know who will look back at me…fun poem…smiles.

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