·϶·Ѯ maybe… just maybe Ѯ·϶·

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..·ϵ·Ѯ·϶·

the heat

…..of

your

body

close

to mine

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………………..your breath

……………………warm

……………………..on

………………….the back

……………………..of

………………….my neck

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……………………………………..the touch

…………………………………………..of

………………………………….your fingertips

………………………………………..lightly

………………………………….running down

……………………………………..my spine

……………………………………………………………·϶·Ѯ·ϵ·

…………………………………………………………..the tip

……………………………………………………………..of

……………………………………………………………your

………………………………………………………….tongue

………………………………………………………….teasing

……………………………………………………….my earlobe

………………………………………………………………………………·϶·Ѯ·ϵ·

………………………………………………………………………………your

……………………………………………………………………………….lips

……………………………………………………………………………..finally

…………………………………………………………………………….meeting

………………………………………………………………………………mine

…………………………………………………………………………passionately

…………………………………………………………………………………………………·϶·Ѯ·ϵ·

…………………………………………………………………………………………………slowly

………………………………………………………………………………………………….you

………………………………………………………………………………………………..seduce

………………………………………………………………………………………………….and

…………………………………………………………………………………………………then

………………………………………………………………………………………………..control

…………………………………………………………………………………………………·϶·Ѯ·ϵ·

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this is my submission for   Poetic Asides2011 April PAD Challenge
day 11 prompt: take the phrase “Maybe (blank);”  replace the blank with a word or phrase; make the new phrase the title of your poem

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this is my entry at Magpie Tales for Mag 61
prompt:   photograph above
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this is my submission for NaPoWriMo
day 11 prompt: Write a poem of at least 40 lines that is a single sentence.
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this is also my entry into Poetry Potluck at Jingle Poetry
although it really isn’t specific to the prompt “Evolution, Environment and Survival”
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30 Comments

Filed under 2011 April PAD Challenge, Jingle Poetry, lust, Magpie Tales, NaPoWriMo, National Poetry Month, photographs, poetry, Post-A-Day2011, sensual

30 responses to “·϶·Ѯ maybe… just maybe Ѯ·϶·

  1. From magic attraction to a kind of domineering intimidation! Lovely form!

  2. This is hot…
    wow.

    A++
    Thanks for sharing with JP.

  3. Like the wine, this has a heady bouquet.

  4. honeyhaiku

    Very sexy and the form reads like part of the seduction.

  5. Helen

    Very, very smooth and oh so seductive.

  6. earlybird

    I love the form – the way it leads the reader across and down the page. Nice twist at the end.

  7. hypercryptical

    Very seductive and very well done!

    Anna :o]

  8. Seductively tender… nice.

  9. Great style and perfect words!

  10. seducing poem .Well written!

  11. ooooh! some seriously seducing words here- who needs chocolate?

    hugs xx

  12. very sensual and compelling.

    • i really appreciate your visit and comment, Louise. your take on the prompt was very powerful. i’d love to read the rest of the story.

  13. oh you’ve taken it to another level, Dani! :D sensual in both form and read.. it was brilliant! :)

    have subscribed to your blog, will come by as and when time permits! :) cheers!

    My Magpie Post

    • wow! thank you so much, Vinay! that’s very, very kind of you. i also appreciate you subscribing ~ i just did the same with your amazing blog. i loved your SIJO and appreciated the explanation. hope to see you soon at one of our blogs.

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