as the sun departs

as the sun departs

the night drops its velvet cloak

across my shoulders

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2 responses to “as the sun departs

  1. I love this and I must admit that my timing was perfect in reading it. I will have to informally add to it, right at the end –

    I find myself wandering about

    old

    dusty

    pages

    of an adventure…

    I couldn’t resist and can you tell I’m in a good book? Your perfect haiku/poem has set the mood brilliantly…

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