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autumn memories
timid waves inching forward
as we fell in love
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shy beginnings of our lust
tender kisses on the beach
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water on warm sand
cool air around fervant need
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our desire building
summer’s exit unnoticed
love’s flames all that we could see
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walking hand-in-hand
in the sunset of our lives
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autumn memories
wishing we could turn back time
start the journey once again
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this is my attempt at Man’yoshu Japanese Poetry ~ Somon: mutual exchanges of love or longing poetry; tanka: (5-7-5-7-7) i wrote this as a love song between a man and a woman { though it would apply to any couple, no matter their gender } the lines in italics are her speaking and the plain text lines are him speaking
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first posted 3 November 2011
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originally inspired by and submitted to ~
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Form For All at dVerse ~ Poets Pub
prompt: Man’yoshu Japanese Poetry ~ Somon: mutual exchanges of love or longing poetry; tanka: (5-7-5-7-7)
{thank you, Gay Reiser Cannon and Jane Kohut-Bartels aka Lady Nyo.}
The Thursday Think Tank #73 at Poets United
prompt: “The Waning Days of Fall”
image above by Ella Wilson
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Lovely poem. I never heard of that type of poem. I am glad you taught me something new! I am a big fan of autumn so I enjoyed it very much. Something is one of my favorite songs. Played it at my wedding!
that’s a beautiful song for a wedding! ♥ thank you for your visit and sweet comment, Winnie.
This is really beautiful.
thank you for your visit and kind comment, MZ! ♥
lovely dani….some journeys def are worth that want to start again just so you can experience the beauty of them once more…
sharing life’s journeys with someone you love… who loves you… what could be better?