∙ɿ ∙ʄ∙ ɾ∙* faeirii *∙ɿ ∙ʄ∙ ɾ∙

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her name was faeirii.

only there were little hearts ♥ instead of  dots above the i’s.  that said it all.  she lived in an on-line “graphic novel” aka comic.  she was little more than a cliché but what else could she expect?  she was drawn by a MIDDLE-AGED WHITE MAN.  what did HE know about teenage girls?  {she refused to think about any perversions HE might have.  HE creeped her out enough, she didn’t want to probe any deeper into HIS sick psyche.}  HE couldn’t be bothered to draw her in detail… she was barely a scribble.  she guessed HE thought it was “cool.”  she thought HE was just lazy.  HE should try flying around with one eye closed all the time or holding onto a cup of  coffee without fingers. let alone getting a boy to kiss her when all she had was a line for lips.  {and where were her boobs, for God’s sake?}  maybe it would be okay if  she were a superhero or at least had a magic wand, but noooooo….  all she ever got to do was flit around giggling and petting glittery unicorns.  did HE actually think this was writing?  or even drawing?  oh, yeah…  don’t forget HIS degree from that school on the matchbook cover.  was it any wonder she was depressed?  …suicidal even?  her future really only offered two options ~ HE would get bored and stop drawing her…  or, the more frightening prospect,  HE would keep drawing her like this the rest of  HIS life!  maybe she could impale herself  on a unicorn’s horn…..

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her name was faeirii

be glad you don’t share her fate

stuck in a BAD comic

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“Faerie’s Aire and Death Waltz”     /    DaRandomiser

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this is my submission to ~

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Poetics: Falling into magic potion – we’re going Comic   at   dVerse ~ Poets Pub
a Fabulous site for poets ~ spend some time at the Pub!
prompt:   Comics  {special thanks to Claudia Schöenfeld for the great post & prompt}

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i am also participating in ~

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NaBloPoMo

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Post A Day

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12 Comments

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12 responses to “∙ɿ ∙ʄ∙ ɾ∙* faeirii *∙ɿ ∙ʄ∙ ɾ∙

  1. this was really cool dani.. food for thoughts beyond the comic world in this… his thoughtlessness and her suffering… very nicely played

  2. It’s a metaphor we earthlings should take seriously: doesn’t matter what you are like, all you need is to get yourself into a good comic! Fine write.

  3. ha. fabulous dani…unique and original…a character stuck in a BAD comic, poorly drawn has feelings too…smiles….you made me feel bad for her…but also smiled at the thought of her…hopefully the future surprises her with something good…

  4. This is the coolest thing ever!

  5. Maybe that’s my problem Dani… Maybe I’m stuck in a bad comic!
    :-)
    Wonderful write my dear friend.

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