Ꮡ •Ꮬ• the soft scent of you •Ꮬ• Ꮡ


Ꮡ • Ꮬ • Ꮡ

the soft scent of  you

lingers on my skin    …..your kiss

still sweet on my lips

a soft scent of  you

lingers on my skin     …..your taste

a sweet ambrosia

the soft scent of  you

lingers on my skin     …..your touch

warms my memory

sweet, soft scent of  you

lingers on my skin    …..your love

remains in my heart

this is my submission to ~

the final  One Shot Wednesday   at   One Stop Poetry
this is an incredible site for poets ~ the archives remain open

Sensational Haiku Wednesday   at   You know…that Blog?
prompt:   scent

The Thursday Think Tank #63     at     Poets United  a FABulous site for poets ~ check them out!
prompt:   What is your favorite smell?

i am also participating in ~

NaBloPoMo

18 Comments

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18 responses to “Ꮡ •Ꮬ• the soft scent of you •Ꮬ• Ꮡ

  1. Frantastic!
    “soft scent of you” what a passionate phrase.
    Well done, Dani!

    • thank you, Sean! ♥ sorry i haven’t visited your blog recently ~ problems with my laptop are making it difficult to even get a post done, but i’ll be by as soon as i can!

  2. mmm…this just feels warm and inviting…sensual…i love it…..

    • thanks, brian! {smile} the first line came to me the second i saw the prompt of “scent” ~ there’s just something about the natural scent of a man….

  3. Lush, immediately immersive.

  4. moondustwriter

    mmm soft sensuous. I love you create allure in your works Dani

    I too have been off computer tho I have been enjoying the break
    Hugs my dear

  5. Very creative usage of haiku. I like how you’ve used the first two lines as a refrain.

  6. Doctor FTSE

    Nicely wrought haiku. Thank you.

  7. A poem in steps? It works well…

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