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come
slake your thirst
drink my ambrosia
come
feed your hunger
partake of me
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all i ask in return
is to do the same to you
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my thirst is
unquenchable
my hunger
knows no bounds
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come
just let go
lose all control
let your desires reign
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fires of passion
unlike any you have known
pleasure on the verge of pain
will lead you
to ecstasy beyond imagination
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come to me
and you will never need
come to me
and you will never leave
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“Say You Will” Kanye West
SOZGUNTUBE
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this is my submission to POETRY JAM
Moving to the Music hosted by Brian Miller
the prompt is to pick a favorite song and either use a line from the song in your poem or write a poem inspired by that song. i selected “Say You Will” by Kanye West. my poem is inspired by the song, particularly these lines ~
“When I grab your neck
I touch your soul.
Take off your cool
Then lose control.”
thanks for a great prompt, Brian.
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well how could resist such an invitation….smiles. lovely written…
thanks, brian. {smiles}
Three poems I’ve read today, two here, one on another blog and all three romantic. :D The last 4 lines, Dani, just echoes with the reader much after the blog has been closed I think. Well said :)
thank you, Leo! i must thank my muse for those last lines as they came whole into my mind after i thought the poem was complete. i really appreciate you taking the time to visit and comment. ♥
Music is all about letting go, just feeling. Your poem describes that perfectly.
thank you, Helen. you’re so right about music being about just feeling ~ i think poetry is all about the emotions conveyed rather than the words or the form. i appreciate your visit and kind comment. ♥
With a touch of sensuality too… Love the picture !
Nice to meet you in Poetry Jam ~
nice to meet you, too! ♥ thank you for your visit and comment.
Wonderful passion and sensuality…
thank you!
This is my first time here. Really nice!
thank you, karen! i hope you’ll come by again. ♥
so good when we manage to let go and just give ourselves to each other…lovely and full of desire
isn’t it great when we can let go? {smile} thank you so much for your visit and comment. ♥
I have to say, its a long time (at least a week) since I had an offer like that!
{giggle}
Beautiful picture led to a beautifully sensual poem!
thank you so much for your visit and kind comment, Mary! ♥
Beautifully seductive…
thank you, Laurie! ♥ i really appreciate your visit and lovely comment.
nice, really lovely. i was thinking the older song with those words…
thank you, Evelyn! ♥ i’m afraid i don’t recall the other song ~ i’ll have to see if i can find it on you tube. thank you for visiting and commenting!