·Ӫ ӫ· say you will ·ӫ Ӫ·

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come

slake your thirst

drink my ambrosia

come

feed your hunger

partake of me

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all i ask in return

is to do the same to you

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my thirst is

unquenchable

my hunger

knows no bounds

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come

just let go

lose all control

let your desires reign

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fires of passion

unlike any you have known

pleasure on the verge of pain

will lead you

to ecstasy beyond imagination

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come to me

and you will never need

come to me

and you will never leave

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“Say You Will”    Kanye West

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this is my submission to    POETRY JAM
Moving to the Music
   hosted by Brian Miller

the prompt is to pick a favorite song and either use a  line from the song in your poem or write a poem inspired by that song.  i selected    “Say You Will”  by Kanye West.  my poem is inspired by the song, particularly these lines ~

“When I grab your neck
 I touch your soul.
 Take off  your cool
 Then lose control.”

thanks for a great prompt, Brian.

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22 Comments

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22 responses to “·Ӫ ӫ· say you will ·ӫ Ӫ·

  1. well how could resist such an invitation….smiles. lovely written…

  2. Leo

    Three poems I’ve read today, two here, one on another blog and all three romantic. :D The last 4 lines, Dani, just echoes with the reader much after the blog has been closed I think. Well said :)

    • thank you, Leo! i must thank my muse for those last lines as they came whole into my mind after i thought the poem was complete. i really appreciate you taking the time to visit and comment. ♥

  3. Helen

    Music is all about letting go, just feeling. Your poem describes that perfectly.

    • thank you, Helen. you’re so right about music being about just feeling ~ i think poetry is all about the emotions conveyed rather than the words or the form. i appreciate your visit and kind comment. ♥

  4. With a touch of sensuality too… Love the picture !

    Nice to meet you in Poetry Jam ~

  5. Wonderful passion and sensuality…

  6. This is my first time here. Really nice!

  7. so good when we manage to let go and just give ourselves to each other…lovely and full of desire

  8. Pete

    I have to say, its a long time (at least a week) since I had an offer like that!

  9. Beautiful picture led to a beautifully sensual poem!

  10. Beautifully seductive…

  11. Evelyn

    nice, really lovely. i was thinking the older song with those words…

    • thank you, Evelyn! ♥ i’m afraid i don’t recall the other song ~ i’ll have to see if i can find it on you tube. thank you for visiting and commenting!

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