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warm breath on my cheek..
your lips tasting mine…
fingertips tracing the curves of my hips…
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tender spots you seek…
shivers down my spine…
a whimper… a soft moan… escape my lips
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the beginnings
of our journey
into ecstasy
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this poem was written for One Shot Wednesday at One Stop Poetry. visit their new {additional} site at http://www.onestoppoetry.com.
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Sensual, well formed stanzas that describe quite the journey. Nice work!
thank you!
oh yeah…feeling the heat off this one…enjoy the journey
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Lovely writing
thank you! your poem is sublime.
Vivid …what a journey.
thank you for visiting and commenting.
Oohh… very visual… and deliciously sensuous!!
Much enjoyed!! Amazing how you put this mountain of feelings into teensy haikus!! Great job!!
thank you so much! your poem is stunning! ♥
Fulfilling the journey.. ..smiles..
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A journey worth prolonging as much as possible…
{smile}
The sensual ecstasy is palpable– if you can make me feel sexy when I’ve got my bedhead and sweats and cup of coffee first thing in the morning, you know you’re good!
awwww! thank you! that is a high compliment indeed. ♥
Perfect intimacy, tasteful sexuality.
thank you! i love that ~ tasteful sexuality. {smile}
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