sun bursts

it never ceases

to amaze me        …..when the sun

bursts into the morn

::   ::

at night i forget

that the sun was ever here

darkness seems the norm

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  2. This one is fantastic! Don’t know how I missed it…

    • oh, i’m happy you like it, Brett! originally it was just the first verse but that was just too blah. i was actually going to trash it when the second verse came. ;-) sorry i couldn’t get to your comment or blog yesterday ~ i’m very cautiously trying to do the things suggested by Windows and Internet Explorer and Norton to see if any of my laptop problems can be corrected. but only having about 30 minutes before it overheats means it’s taking quite a while. i expect at least a few days more. i just stopped into the blog to reply to the comments and it’s time to shut it off again! i’ll let you know as soon as i know if any progress is being made. thank you, kind poet. i hope to “see” you soon. *hugs*

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